Very smooth man!
Thanks mayne glad u enjoyed it :)
I love your bass. It's dope man.
Lyrics are thigh, but the way you deliver needs work. Don't hold back, put some more character in your voice.
Its supposed to be low/depressed sounding, but thanks for the words
It's dope, But one thing I've notice a lot here on NG with audio is, there not enough variation of the beat. Adding like a phase in there some where will make the beat more interesting. And also where is the bridge come in? Is there a hook to it? These are some of the things you should keep in mind when making a beat. Overall though, dope stuff. Keep the fire coming along.
Thanks dude, a lot of my other stuff has bridges and choruses and what you're talking about - but this is more of a freestyle/ranting beat with just verses. Not everything has to stick to formula.
This is pretty dope. However, I don't think your drums has enough bass in it. Because it doesn't boom when I listen to it. But I think if you put a little more bass, it will balance out all the high notes you have in there. Sounds like you use FL Studio, am I right?
Yup, FL8. I'm still noob at it though, some people make jams and like masterpieces off rip. I'm still learning however. But I honestly don't know how to make the bass boom... except for using the sub bass and a couple 3x Osc layers so that it has a note to it cause the sub base is just a boom, doesn't let me give it a note so I can manipulate the sound. But thanks for the comment and i'll work on it some more. And if you, or anyone, knows how to get great bass on it, then I would love to know how myself. (:
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