Very smooth man!
Very smooth man!
Thanks mayne glad u enjoyed it :)
Lyrics are thigh, but the way you deliver needs work. Don't hold back, put some more character in your voice.
Its supposed to be low/depressed sounding, but thanks for the words
It's dope, But one thing I've notice a lot here on NG with audio is, there not enough variation of the beat. Adding like a phase in there some where will make the beat more interesting. And also where is the bridge come in? Is there a hook to it? These are some of the things you should keep in mind when making a beat. Overall though, dope stuff. Keep the fire coming along.
Thanks dude, a lot of my other stuff has bridges and choruses and what you're talking about - but this is more of a freestyle/ranting beat with just verses. Not everything has to stick to formula.
This is pretty dope. However, I don't think your drums has enough bass in it. Because it doesn't boom when I listen to it. But I think if you put a little more bass, it will balance out all the high notes you have in there. Sounds like you use FL Studio, am I right?
Yup, FL8. I'm still noob at it though, some people make jams and like masterpieces off rip. I'm still learning however. But I honestly don't know how to make the bass boom... except for using the sub bass and a couple 3x Osc layers so that it has a note to it cause the sub base is just a boom, doesn't let me give it a note so I can manipulate the sound. But thanks for the comment and i'll work on it some more. And if you, or anyone, knows how to get great bass on it, then I would love to know how myself. (:
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